and part of it was layering the waves of feminism on waves of environmentalism.  anyway, for a 5-10 page paper you really need to go an inch wide and a mile deep.  right now the thesis needs to be tightened up as it is a mile wide and an inch deep.
have her take a narrower view of an event or one wave or era and go deep.
a site I like and I think you can buy a month to month subscription is questia.com
perhaps she could debate the possibility of passing the ERA today?